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Monday, December 17, 2012

Under the stars


As the bike cruised through the Mumbai roads, slowly but steadily leaving the crawling traffic behind, she smiled at the wind brutally hitting her face. She didn’t know where they were going, and she didn’t care. All that mattered to her at this moment was them. Him and her. Him.

She took in a deep breath, trying to conserve his perfume in every last cell in her body. She didn’t know if she’ll ever get to do that again. And at that moment, she didn’t care. All that mattered was now.

They rode for hours, but the expression on her face at the end told him it had been worth it.

Before them lay an expanse of sand, for miles on each side, the sea thundering in front of them, and not a soul in sight.

Just the stars, the waves, and them.

She was scared, yet excited.

“I never believed Mumbai had a beach like this!” she gasped.
“I’ll show you things you never believed possible.” He whispered.

And at that moment, holding hands under the stars, with the waves as their witness, they both truly believed, they’d be together forever.




6 comments:

  1. God bless both of them .. and may they be happy always


    Bikram's

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  2. lovely piece of writing!
    kisses from Sikkim

    prettymucheverythang.blogspot.com

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  5. “I never believed Mumbai had a beach like this!” she gasped.
    “I’ll show you things you never believed possible.” He whispered.

    Then he took her to that very place where his drowned body lay dead, unnoticed, rottening since a week.

    This is how I expected it to end After reading your other workpieces

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  6. @Priyank Shah - I agree, that would definitely have been a better ending!!! :D

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