She walked home slowly, leisurely, her bare feet barely
noticing the sticky tar and muck of the road. The wind slowly caressed her
hair, reminding her of his hands, just a few moments earlier. Just before he sniggered
at the idea of her career, and kissed her on the forehead.
She smiled as she lovingly adored her favourite red stiletto
dangling from her hand, then felt a twinge of sadness at spoiling the pair.
Maybe she shouldn’t have left the other one stuck in his
neck.
Ooh! It turned scary at the end..
ReplyDeleteThat's the way I like it!!! ;)
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ReplyDeleteWicked! Liked it...
ReplyDeleteThank you! Wickedness has its allure ;)
DeleteI loved that twist! Brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!! I'm considering naming them twisties :D
DeleteI was taken aback at the end.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
Thank you so much!! :)
DeleteIt just couldn't get better... Wonderful....loved the twist and how you've put it :) Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I'm beginning for the first time to fall in love with haikus thanks to you!!!
Deletehah wow...Poor girl !!
ReplyDeleteThe end bowled me over!!!!
You have to by far be the only one who had sympathy for the girl!! :D
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