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Wednesday, January 21, 2015

Pointed.



She walked home slowly, leisurely, her bare feet barely noticing the sticky tar and muck of the road. The wind slowly caressed her hair, reminding her of his hands, just a few moments earlier. Just before he sniggered at the idea of her career, and kissed her on the forehead.
She smiled as she lovingly adored her favourite red stiletto dangling from her hand, then felt a twinge of sadness at spoiling the pair.

Maybe she shouldn’t have left the other one stuck in his neck.


15 comments:

  1. Ooh! It turned scary at the end..

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    1. Thank you! Wickedness has its allure ;)

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  5. I loved that twist! Brilliant :)

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    1. Thank you so much!! I'm considering naming them twisties :D

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  6. I was taken aback at the end.
    Awesome!

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  7. It just couldn't get better... Wonderful....loved the twist and how you've put it :) Cheers!

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    1. Thank you so much! I'm beginning for the first time to fall in love with haikus thanks to you!!!

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  8. hah wow...Poor girl !!
    The end bowled me over!!!!

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    1. You have to by far be the only one who had sympathy for the girl!! :D

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