Thursday, April 12, 2012

Twist of Fate


He smiled as the last spurt of frantic bubbles escaped her lips and broke the surface. He let go of her now limp body, and stretching up, reached for the towel. The last sound he heard was the flicking of the hairdryer switch, dragged in by him as he slipped and fell into the tub.


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16 comments:

  1. Awesome! :-) Can see it in front of my eyes.

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  2. @Bhaskar - Thankyou! Let's hope you don't ever actually see it in front of your eyes! ;)

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  3. That was pretty awesome. very nicely written. =)

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  4. wonderful piece and lovely picture.

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  5. Awesome piece! Love the picture too :)

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  6. @Stuti - Thank you!! :)

    @Smita & Sonic - Sadly I cant really take credit for the pic :) But thanks!! :D

    @Phatichar - Thank you!! Coming from the master of short stories, I definitely take it as a compliment :)

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  7. Alternative title: "Weekends with Dexter".

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  8. @icyHighs - Dead Dexter more like it.

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  9. Woho.. just loved it!

    : )
    too good. : )

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  10. Woho.. just loved it!

    : )
    too good. : )

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  11. @theconfusedgraduate - Thank you!!! :D

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  12. It is like a shot of potent drink. Neat, swift and damage done before you know it.

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