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Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Hide & Seek




Hide and seek. It was their favourite game. He would hide, and she would seek. Over and over, they never tired. He would hide, and she would seek. And they would laugh in ecstatic joy at the end of the game.
Until one day, grinning ear to ear, she decided to hide.
He never sought.

16 comments:

  1. The guy is such a loser!..Loved the post :)

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  2. Hi, came here through Indiblogger. I simply loved the way you wrote this....

    Keep blogging!

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  4. @Ana_treek - Isn't he?! And thank you!! :)

    @Me - Thanks a ton! Hope to see you here again!!

    @Jennie - 55 fiction can get addictive for that very fact!! :)

    @Saurabh - Wow!!! Thank you!! Completely made my day!!!! :) :) :)

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  5. This one really hits home.
    Ruchi

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  6. I had a growing smile on my face and you wiped it off with three little words :|

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  7. @Ruchi - I really wish it didn't.

    @PeeVee - Rather words than real life!

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  8. :O

    So...you're finally putting that hattori hanzo to good use, with words of course...

    This was ninja stuff..

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  9. @Phatichar - Learning from you of course!!!

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  10. That is simply amazing, such a meaningful story in such few words, the very essence of a short story is this.

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  11. @Rupertt Wind - Thank You! That comment really means a lot :)

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  12. Sheer brilliance ☺ Loved it!

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  13. @Kiara - Thank you so much!! :)

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