Hide and seek. It was their favourite game. He would hide, and
she would seek. Over and over, they never tired. He would hide, and she would
seek. And they would laugh in ecstatic joy at the end of the game.
Until one day, grinning ear to ear, she decided to hide.
He never sought.
awesome
ReplyDelete@Rahul - Thangu thangu!
ReplyDeleteHi, came here through Indiblogger. I simply loved the way you wrote this....
ReplyDeleteKeep blogging!
short and sweet! Love it!
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ReplyDelete@Ana_treek - Isn't he?! And thank you!! :)
ReplyDelete@Me - Thanks a ton! Hope to see you here again!!
@Jennie - 55 fiction can get addictive for that very fact!! :)
@Saurabh - Wow!!! Thank you!! Completely made my day!!!! :) :) :)
This one really hits home.
ReplyDeleteRuchi
I had a growing smile on my face and you wiped it off with three little words :|
ReplyDelete@Ruchi - I really wish it didn't.
ReplyDelete@PeeVee - Rather words than real life!
:O
ReplyDeleteSo...you're finally putting that hattori hanzo to good use, with words of course...
This was ninja stuff..
@Phatichar - Learning from you of course!!!
ReplyDeleteThat is simply amazing, such a meaningful story in such few words, the very essence of a short story is this.
ReplyDelete@Rupertt Wind - Thank You! That comment really means a lot :)
ReplyDeleteSheer brilliance ☺ Loved it!
ReplyDelete@Kiara - Thank you so much!! :)
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