Monday, August 27, 2012

True Blood




She was shocked at all the blood. She stood helplessly, ignored, as the hospital staff ran about frantically trying to curb the bleeding. Finally, silence filled the room, as the last breath escaped the bloody form.

A silent tear rolled down her cheek, as she watched the nurse wheel her body away to the morgue.


Posted by Shreya at 10:16 AM
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10 comments:

  1. Jayashree SrivatsanAugust 27, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    So she is a ghost? Hmm! Good One :)

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  2. UnknownAugust 27, 2012 at 1:13 PM

    Oh..so she was her spirit?

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  3. Sabyasachi PatraAugust 27, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    Looks like a Ghost. Reminded me of a movie by Nicholas Cage.

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    1. phaticharAugust 30, 2012 at 2:31 PM

      City of angels, right? Or was it bringing out the dead...

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  4. Confused SoulAugust 27, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    Oooh spirits :D .. nice!

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  5. BikramAugust 28, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    Oh ok, now i am confused is she watching someone die, or is she herself .. but then if she is herself then how can a TEAR fall if she has died ..

    BUT beautiful because it has made me think and thats what good stories do .. :)

    Bikram's

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  6. WanderlustAugust 28, 2012 at 4:27 AM

    This I loved. Kudos!

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  7. phaticharAugust 28, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    Realization, shock, and then sad acceptance..

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  8. AnonymousAugust 30, 2012 at 2:24 PM

    not one of my favourites from you...not even close.

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  9. KeirthanaAugust 30, 2012 at 7:35 PM

    Nice one :) The acceptance comes a bit later than the realization even though the time-gap is very minuscle.

    Cheers,
    Keirthana

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