Monday, August 27, 2012

True Blood




She was shocked at all the blood. She stood helplessly, ignored, as the hospital staff ran about frantically trying to curb the bleeding. Finally, silence filled the room, as the last breath escaped the bloody form.

A silent tear rolled down her cheek, as she watched the nurse wheel her body away to the morgue.




10 comments:

  1. So she is a ghost? Hmm! Good One :)

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  2. Looks like a Ghost. Reminded me of a movie by Nicholas Cage.

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    1. City of angels, right? Or was it bringing out the dead...

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  3. Oh ok, now i am confused is she watching someone die, or is she herself .. but then if she is herself then how can a TEAR fall if she has died ..

    BUT beautiful because it has made me think and thats what good stories do .. :)

    Bikram's

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  4. Realization, shock, and then sad acceptance..

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  5. not one of my favourites from you...not even close.

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  6. Nice one :) The acceptance comes a bit later than the realization even though the time-gap is very minuscle.

    Cheers,
    Keirthana

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