One last drag, she thought as she frantically searched for
her pack of smokes before the nurse came back. Finding it, she held the stick
between her parched lips, lusting for the impending drag, and flicked the
switch on the lighter. Only then did she remember the oxygen tube under her
nose.
One last drag.
P.S. So starting today, I'm indulging on a 55-Marathon. A 55-fiction a day. They're addictive and fun to write. So bear with me! ;)
P.S. So starting today, I'm indulging on a 55-Marathon. A 55-fiction a day. They're addictive and fun to write. So bear with me! ;)
the post hits you well, it does.
ReplyDeletePS - only then did she remember'ed'. We can do w/o the ed.
@Anonymous - Dhanyavaad...Typo corrected!!! :)
ReplyDeleteMe likey!
ReplyDeleteNice thinking :)
@Confused Soul - Thank you!!! :)
ReplyDeleteGood One Shreya!
ReplyDelete@jaish_vats - Thanks a ton!!! :)
ReplyDeleteOh god that can turn out to be nasty .. or rather as the title suggests it DID turn out nasty
ReplyDeleteBikram's
I forgot to add .. they have it printed in bold on the box SMOKING is injurious for health .. :)
ReplyDelete@Bikramjit - Injurious and HOW!!! :D
ReplyDeletehow - u jsut wrote a story that cud happen :)
ReplyDeleteor hmmm maybe the other little things like heart attack blocking of arteries etc etc BUt who cares .. let have that drag ..
Funny and you will laugh at this , last week we had at least dozen armed police officers, army , sniffer dogs, helicopter and what not .. Stop a bus thinking there is a terrorist in it.. Because he was using that electronic cigarette and other passengers thought there was something fishy or the smoke was chemical one ..
So smoking is injurious not just for you but others tooo :) he he h
ooops my comment is bigger then your post ... (sorry)
@Bikramjit - Hehehee....thankfully, there's no 55 word limit on the comments! ;)
ReplyDeleteWhy are yours always so creepy?
ReplyDeleteRuchi
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ReplyDeleteReminded me of an episode from Grey's Anatomy. Well written.
ReplyDelete@Ruchi - Arre! Dunno...better punch in 55 words?! :P
ReplyDelete@Wanderlust - Thank you!! :)
On a drag race, huh? You're winning, girl :)
ReplyDelete@phatichar - Thank you thank you!!! :P
ReplyDeleteWhy are yours always so creepy? Ruchi
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